tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24248048.post3521144935996375515..comments2023-07-30T12:13:16.209+02:00Comments on David Meldrum: Sketching in the archipelago ( 20140715 - 16 )Anonymoushttp://www.blogger.com/profile/15023220939520633423noreply@blogger.comBlogger2125tag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24248048.post-60108779432847510592014-07-25T23:25:57.170+02:002014-07-25T23:25:57.170+02:00Thank you! I think the top one lacks a point of fo...Thank you! I think the top one lacks a point of focus, it would have been better if I had more darks. The bottom one is pretty but it does not move me. I am studying composition at the moment, I bought two books which I am reading, so much to learn! Anonymoushttps://www.blogger.com/profile/15023220939520633423noreply@blogger.comtag:blogger.com,1999:blog-24248048.post-62150530919157811562014-07-25T21:12:22.350+02:002014-07-25T21:12:22.350+02:00I like much more the composition in the first one,...I like much more the composition in the first one, but both are wonderful.setxunoreply@blogger.com